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Daniel
Jun 22, 2014 11:57:24 GMT -5
Post by endo on Jun 22, 2014 11:57:24 GMT -5
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Daniel
Jul 6, 2014 17:24:53 GMT -5
Post by theanneh on Jul 6, 2014 17:24:53 GMT -5
This short could have been a bit... longer. It should have built up the suspense quite a bit more. The twist was ok but the short as a whole was kind of boring. Needed more build up. :C
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Daniel
Jul 6, 2014 23:43:22 GMT -5
Post by endo on Jul 6, 2014 23:43:22 GMT -5
You need to watch the short Lights Out a few threads down. They aren't all good, but man, that one is creepy for as short as it is.
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Daniel
Jul 7, 2014 0:16:59 GMT -5
Post by theanneh on Jul 7, 2014 0:16:59 GMT -5
@endo Will do.  I don't doubt shorts as this length can be chilling, by the way. This one could have just benefited from even a minute or two more. |
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