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Post by endo on Jan 14, 2015 11:54:29 GMT -5
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Post by MacReadyOrNot on Feb 1, 2020 22:46:50 GMT -5
Nice short, but there's something missing about it. Not quite all the way there. The ending is abrupt. I want to know if she let him take off her skin or if she said no. Would have made for a better ending. To show that she was just as willing or not as willing to literally expose herself in the relationship as well. Also, had he left or died that would have shown the imprint a person leaves in a relationship more so. Good enough, nevertheless, but could have been great. Would make for a great feature, I feel.
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